In the story, "Journey to Freedom," the main character, Abby, shows inner strength. For example, the text states that her father tells her to collect herbs for a slave, but on her way back, she is stopped by her neighbor when he asks why she was in a hurry. She bravely makes up a fake story so they won't get caught. This shows inner strength because she was undaunted by the neighbor.
In the story, "Journey to Freedom," the main character, Abby, shows inner strength. For example, the text states she shows inner strength when 2 slaves show up at Abby's and her father's house. She learns that one of them is seriously ill with a fever. Her father convinces Abby to get herbs. On her way back, she is confronted by her neighbor. He asks why shes in a hurry, so she bravely makes up a fake story so they won't get caught. This shows inner strength because she was undaunted by the neighbor.
Abby shows inner strength to protect Emma and a women called Nellis but Nellis was very sick and Emma wanted to go out to get some mint herbs to make a tea so that will help Nellis but Emma could not leave but the only one who could have gone was Abby. When Abby left she was picking the mint herbs as fast as possible but then Mr. Carrington came and asked her whats the big rush and Abby was nervous and she felt like she had stop breathing and than made up i lie and Mr.C believed what she said and left her alone then when Abby got back she gave the herbs to Emma and made miss Nellis better. jizael Estrada
in ¨Journey to Freedom¨ Abby shows inner strength to protect Emma and a women called Nellis but Nellis was very sick and Emma wanted to go out to get some mint herbs to make a tea so that will help Nellis but Emma could not leave but the only one who could have gone was Abby. When Abby left she was picking the mint herbs as fast as possible but then Mr. Carrington came and asked her whats the big rush and Abby was nervous because if she had said anything about what ahe is doing she and her father can both get arrested and Emma and Miss Nellis could get taken away and also she felt like she had stop breathing and than made up i lie and Mr.C believed what she said and left her alone then when Abby got back she gave the herbs to Emma and made miss Nellis better. jizael Estrada
Jared:-) in the story journey to freedom a girl named Abigail is helping people that are African American get away from slavery by letting them stay at here house with her dad. a knock on the door she starts to get her blood pumping and then there are 2 African American people she lets them into her "hiding basement" for them to rest. the next morning she goes to check on the but then she sees the older one with a paler face then calls dad for a doctor but then he says no because they could report them so she gets help from the younger one to get herbs so she does when she is coming back her neighbor talks to her she "spun tale" then went in they made a tea the sickness was gone that night. and this shows how she used her inner strength because when she was talking to the neighbor she was calm and spun a quick tale.
Thanh Abigail showed inner strength when she was finding the healing herb on her own. At first she was afraid to found herb, because she didn't repaired for any problem she might caused. And she did not volunteer. Then his dad convinced Abby, she accepted. But she showed inner strength when her neighbor asked her why did she in such a hurry. She stayed calm, to made up a story about she was hunting up mint for mother's special cake recipe. she accomplished her mission perfectly and showed her inner strength.
Olivia In the story ¨Journey to Freedom¨, a girl named Abigail shows inner strength when she had to help a lady who had a fever. If she got caught outside picking the herbs without an excuse, she would have gotten in trouble. When her neighbor asked what she was doing, she made up an excuse of her picking mint for a cake recipe. This shows that she has inner strength because she was able to make up an explanation without being suspicious.
in the story Journey to Freedom Abby show inner strength because when her neighbor asked what was she doing she told him that she was getting mint leaves for her mom's special recipe and her neighbor believed her and didn't get suspicious.
Aiden In the story journey to freedom abigail shows inner strength by trying to help emma with her fever. Emma is telling abigail things to collect the herbs to help a emma. She shows inner strength again because if she would have gotten caught she would be in trouble. When abigail gets back to the house mother puts them in tea so you don’t taste them. Later that night emma’s fever broke and it is sad to see them go and she thanked emma for aiding her in her own journey.
Edgar:-) In the story the journey to freedom Abigail's dad makes is house a station for the underground railroad. when two people came to came to the house Abigail when to go help then get in because they were waiting for them. when one of them was sick abigail had to have inerstreangth to go out and get the some flowers for the medisan. when the neighbor started to ask Questions she anwerd them camly and to in a scared way this shows inerstreagth.
In the story Journey to Freedom the main character Abby shows inner strength by coming up with a quick way to answer her neighbor when she asked her what she was doing. On page 326 it states ¨Undaunted, I spun a tale about hunting up mint for Mothers special cake recipe, and my voice was wondrous calm as I presented a sprig¨...for the Missus.¨ On that same page it says ¨I commenced to breathe again.¨ That shows inner strength because in the ¨beginning¨ she was holding her breathe for so long because she was nervous but that all changed.
Abby shows inner strength when she is getting the flowers for Nelli because she had a fever. In the text,Journey to freedom, the father tells abby to go to the field for the medicine flower, when she has them, she runs into the neighbor. The neighbor asked Abby what is she doing, she made up a story so the neighbor doesn't know what's going on. This shows her inner strength.
Abby shows inner strength by going on an adventure to find special herbs that heal a fever. She looked and looked and at last she found the herb. On her way home her neighbor questioned her about why she was out ahe was in panic but replied in a calm way and said "Im hunting up mint for my mothers special cake recipe" she lied, and eve gave him a sprig of mint and went on to her house she was so brave and remembered not to say anything that would get her and her father in trouble she found the herb went home and cured nellis.
Valentin in the story journey to freedom the main character Abby has showed her inner strength because they were taking care of a slave, but they got the fever, so Abby went outside to get a plant to help cure the slave. While she was running back, her neighbor said "where to in such a hurry", and she responded " She was hunting up some mint for her mothers special cake recipe, he nodded thanks and continued on.
Ashley In the story,"Journey to Freedom", Abby, the main character, showed inner strength. For example, in the text it states that Emma wanted to go out and pick fever herbs but Abby's father wouldn't allow her to go out since she was slave who was hiding so he volunteered Abby to go out and pick them. On her way back she stumbled upon her next door neighbor Mr.Carrington, he asked her why she was in a big hurry. She made up a fake story bravely so her family and her wouldn't get caught. Mr.Carrington believed it and she gave him a present as a distraction. This shows inner strength because she wasn't scared/undaunted by the neighbor.
In the story,"Journey to Freedom", Abigail shows her inner strength by going on a little trip to get herbs for Nellis since she became ill. Abby first feels like fainting. Emma volunteers to get the herbs to help Nellis, but instead Abby's father volunteers Abby to get the herbs instead. Abby then goes out and picks out the mint and herbs calmly, acting like nothing's wrong. On her way home, her neighbor asks why she is in such a hurry. Abby bravely and quickly comes up with a story stating, "Undaunted, I spun a tale hunting up mint for Mother's special cake recipe." Abby then goes home and helps Emma with the tea, giving it to Nellis so she could rest and feel better. Abby shows her inner strength three ways. Although she may have lost her mother, she still helps slaves like Emma and Nellis get to safety. Second, she may have been afraid of going out, but she knew it was the right thing to do to help. Lastly, she bravely went out, got what she needed, and has a nice, short talk and gives a gift to her neighbor to distract him from her being somewhat suspicious.
Michelle In the story Journey to freedom,the character Abigail showed inner strength ,by going to find the healing herb on her own,but if she got caught it would be Terrible. she showed inner strength by finding the healing herb because she was scared,in the text it states that,papa said the fields have eyes,take care of how you act,and speak she left with haste with her basket.
In the story ¨Journey to Freedom¨, Abigail Parker shows inner strength when she is called upon to help people escape from slavery. Abby helps her father by getting food and water for Nellis and Emma. Nellis does not feel well, so Abby´s father tells her to get some fever herbs. For example, Abby plucks some mint and some white flowers. Suddenly she sees her neighbor and comes up with something to not make it suspicious. This shows that Abby cares for Nellis and Emma and has inner strength because it is her duty to help save the slaves. In the end Abigail notices that Emma and her both share the same desperation, but ¨It´s why folks come together.Problems shared be problems halved.¨ -Mia
Abby the main character in the story Journey To Freedom shows inner strength when going to get the fever herbs. Her father tells her “The fields have Eyes and the woods have ears”. She left in haste thinking about what emma had told her. But as she was getting home she meet his neighbor Mr.Carrington. Bravely she spun a tale and Mr.Carrington believed her.This shows how she used her inner strength and saved the slaves from being caught.
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ReplyDeleteIn the story, "Journey to Freedom," the main character, Abby, shows inner strength. For example, the text states that her father tells her to collect herbs for a slave, but on her way back, she is stopped by her neighbor when he asks why she was in a hurry. She bravely makes up a fake story so they won't get caught. This shows inner strength because she was undaunted by the neighbor.
Great job Peter! You followed the RACE model. My only suggestion would be to elaborate on details about the story.
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DeleteIn the story, "Journey to Freedom," the main character, Abby, shows inner strength. For example, the text states she shows inner strength when 2 slaves show up at Abby's and her father's house. She learns that one of them is seriously ill with a fever. Her father convinces Abby to get herbs. On her way back, she is confronted by her neighbor. He asks why shes in a hurry, so she bravely makes up a fake story so they won't get caught. This shows inner strength because she was undaunted by the neighbor.
Abby shows inner strength to protect Emma and a women called Nellis but Nellis was very sick and Emma wanted to go out to get some mint herbs to make a tea so that will help Nellis but Emma could not leave but the only one who could have gone was Abby. When Abby left she was picking the mint herbs as fast as possible but then Mr. Carrington came and asked her whats the big rush and Abby was nervous and she felt like she had stop breathing and than made up i lie and Mr.C believed what she said and left her alone then when Abby got back she gave the herbs to Emma and made miss Nellis better. jizael Estrada
ReplyDeleteMake sure to tell the name of the story. Also explain why she was nervous and how her actions showed inner strength
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Deletein ¨Journey to Freedom¨ Abby shows inner strength to protect Emma and a women called Nellis but Nellis was very sick and Emma wanted to go out to get some mint herbs to make a tea so that will help Nellis but Emma could not leave but the only one who could have gone was Abby. When Abby left she was picking the mint herbs as fast as possible but then Mr. Carrington came and asked her whats the big rush and Abby was nervous because if she had said anything about what ahe is doing she and her father can both get arrested and Emma and Miss Nellis could get taken away and also she felt like she had stop breathing and than made up i lie and Mr.C believed what she said and left her alone then when Abby got back she gave the herbs to Emma and made miss Nellis better. jizael Estrada
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ReplyDeletein the story journey to freedom a girl named Abigail is helping people that are African American get away from slavery by letting them stay at here house with her dad. a knock on the door she starts to get her blood pumping and then there are 2 African American people she lets them into her "hiding basement" for them to rest. the next morning she goes to check on the but then she sees the older one with a paler face then calls dad for a doctor but then he says no because they could report them so she gets help from the younger one to get herbs so she does when she is coming back her neighbor talks to her she "spun tale" then went in they made a tea the sickness was gone that night. and this shows how she used her inner strength because when she was talking to the neighbor she was calm and spun a quick tale.
Nice details Jared, but be sure to stick to only the piece that showed inner strength.
Deleteshe spun a quick tale and was calm when the neighbor asked"what are you in such a rush for?" then she said its for my moms cake and gave him a sprig
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ReplyDeleteAbigail showed inner strength when she was finding the healing herb on her own. At first she was afraid to found herb, because she didn't repaired for any problem she might caused. And she did not volunteer. Then his dad convinced Abby, she accepted. But she showed inner strength when her neighbor asked her why did she in such a hurry. She stayed calm, to made up a story about she was hunting up mint for mother's special cake recipe. she accomplished her mission perfectly and showed her inner strength.
Great job Thanh. Be sure to state the name of the story.
DeleteJourney to Freedom.
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ReplyDeleteIn the story ¨Journey to Freedom¨, a girl named Abigail shows inner strength when she had to help a lady who had a fever. If she got caught outside picking the herbs without an excuse, she would have gotten in trouble. When her neighbor asked what she was doing, she made up an excuse of her picking mint for a cake recipe. This shows that she has inner strength because she was able to make up an explanation without being suspicious.
Great job Olivia. You followed the RACE model! My suggestion is to elaborate as to why she would have gotten in trouble.
Deletein the story Journey to Freedom Abby show inner strength because when her neighbor asked what was she doing she told him that she was getting mint leaves for her mom's special recipe and her neighbor believed her and didn't get suspicious.
ReplyDeleteGood start Ryan. This is all one sentence. Add more details about why the character is collecting herbs and the possible consequences
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ReplyDeleteIn the story journey to freedom abigail shows inner strength by trying to help emma with her fever. Emma is telling abigail things to collect the herbs to help a emma. She shows inner strength again because if she would have gotten caught she would be in trouble. When abigail gets back to the house mother puts them in tea so you don’t taste them. Later that night emma’s fever broke and it is sad to see them go and she thanked emma for aiding her in her own journey.
Good start Aiden. Be careful with your details, her mother did not put the items in the tea. Go back to the text to verify your citation.
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Deletesorry she put them in a cake recipe
Edgar:-)
ReplyDeleteIn the story the journey to freedom Abigail's dad makes is house a station for the underground railroad. when two people came to came to the house Abigail when to go help then get in because they were waiting for them. when one of them was sick abigail had to have inerstreangth to go out and get the some flowers for the medisan.
when the neighbor started to ask Questions she anwerd them camly and to in a scared way this shows inerstreagth.
Good start Edgar. Check your grammar, it's hard to understand
DeleteIn the story Journey to Freedom the main character Abby shows inner strength by coming up with a quick way to answer her neighbor when she asked her what she was doing. On page 326 it states ¨Undaunted, I spun a tale about hunting up mint for Mothers special cake recipe, and my voice was wondrous calm as I presented a sprig¨...for the Missus.¨ On that same page it says ¨I commenced to breathe again.¨ That shows inner strength because in the ¨beginning¨ she was holding her breathe for so long because she was nervous but that all changed.
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DeleteGreat start Eva. Add details to explain why she had to come up with an answer and possible consequences she and the others faced.
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ReplyDeleteAbby shows inner strength when she is getting the flowers for Nelli because she had a fever. In the text,Journey to freedom, the father tells abby to go to the field for the medicine flower, when she has them, she runs into the neighbor. The neighbor asked Abby what is she doing, she made up a story so the neighbor doesn't know what's going on. This shows her inner strength.
ReplyDeleteAbby shows inner strength by going on an adventure to find special herbs that heal a fever. She looked and looked and at last she found the herb. On her way home her neighbor questioned her about why she was out ahe was in panic but replied in a calm way and said "Im hunting up mint for my mothers special cake recipe" she lied, and eve gave him a sprig of mint and went on to her house she was so brave and remembered not to say anything that would get her and her father in trouble she found the herb went home and cured nellis.
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ReplyDeletein the story journey to freedom the main character Abby has showed her inner strength because they were taking care of a slave, but they got the fever, so Abby went outside to get a plant to help cure the slave. While she was running back, her neighbor said "where to in such a hurry", and she responded " She was hunting up some mint for her mothers special cake recipe, he nodded thanks and continued on.
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ReplyDeleteIn the story,"Journey to Freedom", Abby, the main character, showed inner strength. For example, in the text it states that Emma wanted to go out and pick fever herbs but Abby's father wouldn't allow her to go out since she was slave who was hiding so he volunteered Abby to go out and pick them. On her way back she stumbled upon her next door neighbor Mr.Carrington, he asked her why she was in a big hurry. She made up a fake story bravely so her family and her wouldn't get caught. Mr.Carrington believed it and she gave him a present as a distraction. This shows inner strength because she wasn't scared/undaunted by the neighbor.
In the story,"Journey to Freedom", Abigail shows her inner strength by going on a little trip to get herbs for Nellis since she became ill. Abby first feels like fainting. Emma volunteers to get the herbs to help Nellis, but instead Abby's father volunteers Abby to get the herbs instead. Abby then goes out and picks out the mint and herbs calmly, acting like nothing's wrong. On her way home, her neighbor asks why she is in such a hurry. Abby bravely and quickly comes up with a story stating, "Undaunted, I spun a tale hunting up mint for Mother's special cake recipe." Abby then goes home and helps Emma with the tea, giving it to Nellis so she could rest and feel better. Abby shows her inner strength three ways. Although she may have lost her mother, she still helps slaves like Emma and Nellis get to safety. Second, she may have been afraid of going out, but she knew it was the right thing to do to help. Lastly, she bravely went out, got what she needed, and has a nice, short talk and gives a gift to her neighbor to distract him from her being somewhat suspicious.
ReplyDeleteMichelle In the story Journey to freedom,the character Abigail showed inner strength ,by going to find the healing herb on her own,but if she got caught it would be Terrible. she showed inner strength by finding the healing herb because she was scared,in the text it states that,papa said the fields have eyes,take care of how you act,and speak she left with haste with her basket.
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ReplyDeleteIn the story ¨Journey to Freedom¨, Abigail Parker shows inner strength when she is called upon to help people escape from slavery. Abby helps her father by getting food and water for Nellis and Emma. Nellis does not feel well, so Abby´s father tells her to get some fever herbs. For example, Abby plucks some mint and some white flowers. Suddenly she sees her neighbor and comes up with something to not make it suspicious. This shows that Abby cares for Nellis and Emma and has inner strength because it is her duty to help save the slaves. In the end Abigail notices that Emma and her both share the same desperation, but ¨It´s why folks come together.Problems shared be problems halved.¨ -Mia
Abby the main character in the story Journey To Freedom shows inner strength when going to get the fever herbs. Her father tells her “The fields have Eyes and the woods have ears”. She left in haste thinking about what emma had told her. But as she was getting home she meet his neighbor Mr.Carrington. Bravely she spun a tale and Mr.Carrington believed her.This shows how she used her inner strength and saved the slaves from being caught.
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